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Polyclinics, GP clinics to administer Covid-19 vaccine

For goodness sake, this is not how you do a jump to another page: The first to take the jab at the Na-???? Not even a full word??? In fact, don’t even need those pars on page one. The headline is good enough.

The line on Tan speaking after jab. Like he wasn’t speaking BEFORE jab and now he can…I know what the line means but a journalist’s job is not to make readers stumble while reading

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