7 in 10 fully vaccinated as S’pore marks National Day

Is ST re-writing journalism? Got to read halfway after brilliant blue skies to get to 7 in 10 that’s flashed in the headline.

Try this for intro if want both points in: The day that Singapore turned 56 also marked an important milestone in its fight against the COVID-19 virus – 7 in 10 people have been vaccinated.

Better still, keep celebration to parade and stick a box in the middle of the story to say 7 in 10 vaccinated. Right now it looks like two stories one on top of the other.

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