This story would be better read than if headline reads NUS waives tuition fees for 3,300 students. That’s a significant move. The trouble with such a general headline is that readers would think it’s yet another enhancement/improvement/scaling up etc…

NUS boosts financial aid, 3,300 needy undergrads expected to benefit
This story would be better read than if headline reads NUS waives tuition fees for 3,300 students. That’s a significant move. The trouble with such a general headline is that readers would think it’s yet another enhancement/improvement/scaling up etc…
1–2 minutes


